Quick Tale #2
Near Death
He lay there, prone and exposed. Strange noises, eerily similar to rats gnawing at old leather, in his head. The pain. The mind numbing, searing pain. The ignominy of lying helpless. The hot orb of light burning above. He lay there. Prone, unable to move, unable to think, not wanting anything except for the pain to end. For it all to end.
And then the dentist said “You’re done”
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June 28th, 2005 at 11:06 pm
ouch! sweet pain. all puns intended.
June 29th, 2005 at 11:14 am
wonderful!!
June 29th, 2005 at 7:45 pm
But the real pain comes afterwards, much after you leave the dentist’s execution chair. Teeth somehow have a built-in clock. The pain peaks at dusk.
June 30th, 2005 at 4:56 pm
Now this is the eleventh post i am reading in the dan brown style…i would rather cut copy comments…is it the trend…then mine might be one too…http://vampiresndreams.blogspot.com/2005/06/anniyan.html…Dont worry not the review of the movie though
June 30th, 2005 at 4:57 pm
why dont you try to write poems ? anyways nice posting…..
July 1st, 2005 at 1:23 am
Another quicktale:) guess it is the In thing in many blogs,and this one was good:)
July 1st, 2005 at 1:25 am
Good one!
July 1st, 2005 at 10:26 am
The death before the beginning
July 2nd, 2005 at 10:10 pm
Hi CC. Pretty good, man, this tale! Like it! More, more!