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deep intriguing mysterious pools of fear and beauty and pain come here looks that melt into revenge and anger transforming angel to man eater and life and moods evolution’s first stage and eve and adam and the birth of the ground on which i stand isn’t it solid and reassuring and wasn’t it red hot liquid lava and amazing it’s now blacker than those dark lasers that is the siren’s eye oh before i forget we are talking of the colour black have you seen that little cat cross your path….CRASH!

Posted by Chandrachoodan Gopalakrishnan on October 28th, 2004 | Filed in Random Writings |


12 Responses to “Untitled”

  1. kautilya Says:

    What happened to the poor cat? Was any animal injured in the writing of the post

  2. Ravages Says:

    The only animal to be injured was the animal called imagination. I absolutely stressed it out. :)

  3. Princess Says:

    Hah. Now this is what I call ‘creative’ writing.:-))))Imagination back on-line yet?

  4. Chenthil Says:

    Hmmm. And I thought this was your attempt at Magical Realism style of writing (Magical Realism = not understood by anybody)

  5. Ravages Says:

    Havent heard of Magical realism yet. Am just reading up on the link you gave me thanks for that.

  6. Whirlwings Says:

    Untitled, uninterrupted, unconscious unanything!

  7. divya Says:

    tsk tsk.. seems grammar doesnt figure in ur imagination!

  8. Jax Says:

    Hey! haven’t you heard of something called ‘punctuation’?

  9. Ravages Says:

    Jax: Apparently, my imagination and the subconcious hasn’t.
    I attempted a new style of writing – just putting down thoughts the way they appear in my brain – no pauses, just unconnected, random beeps of electrical signals. No punctuation.

    I wrote whatever was on top of my mind, in whatever order they came, in the style they came in

  10. Ravages Says:

    grammar is not always a prerogative when attempting a different style of writing i intentionally left out those punctuations and pauses for i wanted to write my thoughts in the same way they appear

  11. Ravages Says:

    Thanks Pavithra My imagination, sometimes a fugitive, has just been returned to base. :)

  12. neelima Says:

    Thoughts and imaginations donot follow patterns,donot need tags of grammer,u confirmed it,good one,liked it alot,keep going

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