28Oct/0412
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deep intriguing mysterious pools of fear and beauty and pain come here looks that melt into revenge and anger transforming angel to man eater and life and moods evolution’s first stage and eve and adam and the birth of the ground on which i stand isn’t it solid and reassuring and wasn’t it red hot liquid lava and amazing it’s now blacker than those dark lasers that is the siren’s eye oh before i forget we are talking of the colour black have you seen that little cat cross your path….CRASH!
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October 28th, 2004 - 05:39
What happened to the poor cat? Was any animal injured in the writing of the post
October 28th, 2004 - 05:53
The only animal to be injured was the animal called imagination. I absolutely stressed it out.
October 28th, 2004 - 06:54
Hah. Now this is what I call ‘creative’ writing.:-))))Imagination back on-line yet?
October 29th, 2004 - 01:41
Hmmm. And I thought this was your attempt at Magical Realism style of writing (Magical Realism = not understood by anybody)
October 29th, 2004 - 02:01
Havent heard of Magical realism yet. Am just reading up on the link you gave me thanks for that.
October 29th, 2004 - 04:11
Untitled, uninterrupted, unconscious unanything!
October 29th, 2004 - 08:37
tsk tsk.. seems grammar doesnt figure in ur imagination!
October 29th, 2004 - 09:23
Hey! haven’t you heard of something called ‘punctuation’?
October 29th, 2004 - 09:30
Jax: Apparently, my imagination and the subconcious hasn’t.
I attempted a new style of writing – just putting down thoughts the way they appear in my brain – no pauses, just unconnected, random beeps of electrical signals. No punctuation.
I wrote whatever was on top of my mind, in whatever order they came, in the style they came in
October 29th, 2004 - 09:31
grammar is not always a prerogative when attempting a different style of writing i intentionally left out those punctuations and pauses for i wanted to write my thoughts in the same way they appear
October 29th, 2004 - 09:32
Thanks Pavithra My imagination, sometimes a fugitive, has just been returned to base.
October 29th, 2004 - 09:46
Thoughts and imaginations donot follow patterns,donot need tags of grammer,u confirmed it,good one,liked it alot,keep going